You made me click the link on the other version and now i'm here.
btw is it me or does the area around her ass and face look more detailed?
Cuz I can see her freckles(good god I love freckles) and the nice shine *cough* between *cough* and around her ass. but looking at her uniform and guns makes me think that you made sure to highlight all the important parts and left a bit of the draw lines. however it's not a bad thing, really gets your point across and it still looks nice having that rough effect.