I like it
I like these types for the effort and stale you put fourth probably not my type of art piece but again you put fourth the effort and they do grow on me. These comic styles are pretty interesting I always like these types and I love how you use the whole canvus to your advantage and thats what makes this unique Nice effort here the art piece is different and I like what you did here and the talent shows off well, So I do like this and you will have me interested in more of these types.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I honestly think this is fine as is, but would love to see some more special enhacements in backrounds.
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