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Hi guys !
Okay so this is the cover of my first "naughty" comic hahaha.
i really hope you will enjoy ! it was really fun to do !

you can read the english version here :
https://www.fakku.net/manga/sleeping-island-japanese

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Salut les mecs !
Voici la couverture de ma premiere BD "coquine" !
c'était bien fun a faire, j'espère que vous aimerez !

vous pouvez lire la version française ici:
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/736700/300d55ee66/

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https://e-hentai.org/g/737192/a8bce312d1/ latest English link. Look at other works under the artist's tag for other languages.

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C'est tellement mignonne cette cover! Elle est super joli! Le style d'art est mignon et le coloriage est magnifique! J'aurais aimé que toute la bd était en couleur comme celuci!
J'aime bien son expression coquine!

Gotta say, the comic is real good and the art is very cute. One hiccup tho, the onomatopoeias in the english versions are from the french one and don't translate very well.

First, some letters don't produce the same sound in both language, so if you want the sounds to stay the same you'll have to change some letters.

But also, why would you want the sound to be the same ? An example, in french when it hurts you say "Aïe" whereas you say "Ouch" in english. In your comic, at the end, your caracter says "Hihi", but in english it would've sounded more like "Hehe".

But like I said your comic is awesome already, so it's just ways to perfect it. And I just realised this is a comic you made a while ago so you might have fixed that already and I didn't even bother to check…

Anyways, good luck on your artistic journey. Bonne continuation.

I love it

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Ephyse
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Uploaded
Sep 8, 2014
9:03 PM EDT
Category
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780 x 1097 px
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