Formal Zeal

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Formal Zeal

Author Comments

i suck at drawing clothing ok?


Very nice piece of art. I am very bad at drawing and art in a whole, but this really makes me smile as it is truly amazing, good job, hopefully one day i can learn to art hahah! Any help would be appreciated but keep making these they are awesome!

Honestly I don't feel as though the clothing is bad at all. I really feel as though the issue is a somewhat flat bodily proportion. It just seems very 2-d. The right arm (our left) begins with no depth, exactly like the other arm, while the forearm really doesn't match it. I also noticed the position of her right leg is very unnatural.

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EmpirePhoenix responds:

Thank you for the comment!

I agree with your 1st point , i tried to draw a pose i never tried before this is literally the 1st time i ever drew something like that and so i don't quite get how to make it show depth yet.
but i did not notice the mismatch with the forearm it does look a bit weird doesn't it...

The leg however is another matter, the dress is the issue with it . I drew the dress from the stomach which covers the hips and makes it look like she has a smaller body which in turn makes the leg look too long and unnatural.
its a shame but i wanted to focus on the clothing more than anything.

i will do my best to improve in the future :D

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Credits & Info

3.62 / 5.00

Mar 29, 2013 | 10:53 AM EDT
File Info
2360 x 3355 px
2.4 mb

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