Nice portrait! Looks detailed and realistic, though some of the facial features could be defined a bit more. Eyelashes for example really gleam in their nonexistence, as does the inside of that one ear. The faces look unnaturally clean as well, even though their shaded, and the eyes look a bit sharp, maybe not watery enough. Overall it's looks good though, a lot of detail, and a different angle of drawing. Keep it going!
Okay man, thanks for the advices :D I'll try to do that in the next ones :D