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4.80 / 5.00

Jan 25, 2013 | 9:35 AM EST
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This was the first time I tried doing a only-digital painting.



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Not bad, i think it would have helped with a solid/textured background rather then having white near the edges where it looks like you couldn't be bothered to go up to the edges. skin tone wise some knowledge has gone into it but could benefit from a more vibrant collection, add some pinks/oranges/greys in there maybe. her green eye looks two small or off centred and her hair is unnaturally "blocky/clumped together", also maybe go a bit darker with your shading if you want a more realistic feel, the darkest brown seems to be used for her nostrils and eyelashes but i feel it could use some deeper shades around the neck (including the hair) also the hair above her blue eye seems to be coming from the wrong angle, it should curve from the middle.

this review may seem harsh but looking at your traditional art you have done a lot of studies which does show here, however you seem to have lost/forgotten a bit. keep at it!

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ElDiogo responds:

Thanks a lot for the review, man :)

Most of the other drawings were a "copy" from another drawings and photographs [except the ones I used both pencil and photoshop], and this was the first time I tried to create something out of my mind, and also, at this time I wasn't fully adapted with working with my tablet.......but I can't use that as an excuse to those errors.

Creating is, and always has been my biggest challenge, 'cause I can draw something I'm seeing, but when it comes to create something from zero, I kinda freeze and make mistakes everywhere...but I've been learning with my mistakes. Thanks again :)