A little more work on the overall structure and you'll be alright.
yeah im planning on re-doing him now i have photoshop to play around with... ms paint is abit of a bitch, cheers for the feedback man
I like the extra detail
i like you liking the extra detail
Not bad mate.
Good work witht he shading,a nd i like th O2 sticker on the case ;)
His left hand needs some depth adding to it, try changing the perspective of the fingers.
Also the tie looks cardboard, because of the stiff angel it is at.
But still nice work bud :)
I like how you made the coat! could work on the hands some more(his left).
thank you for the votes. I definatly know what you mean about the hands, they are abit awkward, but i dont think its too bad for ms paint work
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