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OneyPlays Funny Scream Zine Piece

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My final piece for the Oney Plays Funny Scream Zine.
This was done back in October for an Oney Plays Zine organized by @Chebdos on twitter. It was a lot of fun to work on!

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Ya made the rough, coarse, hard spray tool great, congrats on that mang. Everything else is also awesome



Nice piece, tastes like a warm cup of friendship. Making your backgrounds as great as your characters is what I'd love to see. The background isn't at all detrimental to it, but looking at the floor it feels flat and I feel the perfectly crisp, weighted, and straightened lines of the wall clash with the warm fuzziness of the boys.

I like the scrunchy mustache choice on Julian, a small detail that adds a little pizazz.



The top loop on the capital letter "Z" makes it look like a cursive capital "L." The phrase can legitimately be mistaken as "Funny Scream Line."
To remedy this without sacrificing the more graceful look to the font, try making the top point of the "Z" like the top-right corner of the lower case cursive letter "r."


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Apr 21, 2018
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1984 x 2326 px
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