the eye needs more detail instead of just being a red blob.
In fact I think I have one running around in my home somewhere...
Don't think rat poison would help.
But yeah, as said before, the shading needs some work, as well as the details on the tail. The background areas next to the stomach and the thing on its back are just off. Also it seems to only have one leg and arm (not a big deal depends on your art style). but yeah, fairly nice piece of work. Keep practicing.
it good but not great
im not saying im a better artist but it could use some detail and some shadow
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