She's just asking for it
is not that bad, but work on her face, and anatomy, i've seen your other pictures, i think you'll need practice with that.
I love the picture you have talent my friend, however I think you need to work on some definition like how her shoulders are drawn, they are rough edged her ass could be rounder and her boobs well again rough the final thing is her blush. But altogether i love how well you drew this you pulled the background in making this a good peice of art!
i see what you mean thank u for your input :)
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