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Okay, so this is the first-time-request ever.

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Ok cool

So this was pretty nifty I like all the elements here you could use some shine on the helmet and some glow on the sabre, those are just a few things I would ad as a form of improvement here but nice work overall. Yes I have to say this was somenice work and some nice efforts, you for sure know what youare doing and it shows, some areas could be better, but you have it down for the most part. So my Insight on this whole piece is that you have Captured something differant and unique. Ok so this is where I call it an end for the review, but may I mention that it was a nice and fun experience reviewing this piece as its a fave of mine. good Polish on this will make it an Extended masterpiece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you could use some shine on the helmet and some glow on the sabre.

~X~

A decent character design, you have a good sense of detail but the body is a bit disproportionate. Also I suggest dropping the overly anime eyes, they really take away from the rest of the face and are generally unoriginal and unnecessary.

Drawesometoons responds:

Well, it was requested that way. And the proportion is just my style. But thanks for your Review. (:

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Jan 31, 2013
5:05 AM EST
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