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3.45 / 5.00

Dec 5, 2009 | 2:48 PM EST
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Author Comments

Here is the long awaited second page of my Manga! Well long awaited for me >.>...after all that work I put into it, I know it isn't that good I'm trying my best to bring you the best possible Manga my hands can humanly make possible! Haha I'll make sure to release more soon so you'll be able to enjoy a nice amateur Manga by me ^^. I hope you find this page interesting and a nice read even though it's like a 20 sec read xD.

Well thanks for whoever gives me support and any form of constructive criticism etc...

Saturday 5/12/09 12:10 AM



Rated 3 / 5 stars


So, it looks like you are super influenced by the "Bleach" Manga. My suggestion is to use some Mannequins to help you with placement and proportions. Also I think you should concentrate on how you draw hairXD Even for manga it looks impossible for someone to have hair like that :/
Also you should branch of into your own style than try to imitate others XD" It's not a good thing in the long run XD"
It's a good start thou. Keep on going and you'll get better XD


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Like the style, keep it up.

Good, like the style. the one characters left arm seems wonky but its good. At least i see that there are other people outside Japan that aspire to do Manga.