It's quite dead in there. Perhaps in death, you've thus breathed life into the art? The problem is that it's so depressing! Or perchance, that's the point? It's just a big blah though compared to your other works.
Darkness strikes first for some, the brightness behind might be forgotten at first, but its presence is even bigger than the dark flocks that tries to make its path among the scenery. Might be caused by the picture, but the darkness has some of the brightness going throught it in real life, every colours appearing here and there were very thin coats of transparent color one on another to achieve a sort of transparency. What you might see as a simple image withrandom patterns actualy was experimentation and a good amount of patience. I hope this have enlighten you a little on the piece, nevertheless I thank you for sharing your opinion!