You banned my other account, so here's some a healty review

Nice use of color but there's zero detail, an brush this size should be used to do logos or things like that, when you do art, doesnt matter how much you know, it looks odd and scary.
If this was suposed to be erotic it lost all of it, since the lack of detail just makes it look weird and non-human, the limbs appear too big, the head looks extremely offputting, looks like she's a bald man with a wig and lipstick, the hair is really awkward. The girl is not atractive, feminine, human or appealing.
Usually, when a person wants to do erotic art or they to extremely real drawings of hot woman or, if they're aiming for a more cartoonish style the exaggerate a lot, like jessica rabbit for example. When you put eyes this big, but moneky-ish arms and legs and this extremely thick outline, it looks like an real mess.
I think with practice, study and after you re-think all of your style you can start doing great art, since you do have potential.
As a tip, i think you should star searching more for art, start studying drawings you like and erotic art that's impressive or well done, and dont jerk off while you do that. milo manara, heavy metal magazine or penthouse comics, shadbase.com and sinnergate.com are some good places to start.

Nice use of color but there's zero detail, an brush this size should be used to do logos or things like that, when you do art, doesnt matter how much you know, it looks odd and scary.

If this was suposed to be erotic it lost all of it, since the lack of detail just makes it look weird and non-human, the limbs appear too big, the head looks extremely offputting, looks like she's a bald man with a wig and lipstick, the hair is really awkward. The girl is not atractive, feminine, human or appealing.

Usually, when a person wants to do erotic art or they to extremely real drawings of hot woman or, if they're aiming for a more cartoonish style the exaggerate a lot, like jessica rabbit for example. When you put eyes this big, but moneky-ish arms and legs and this extremely thick outline, it looks like an real mess.

I think with practice, study and after you re-think all of your style you can start doing great art, since you do have potential.

As a tip, i think you should star searching more for art, start studying drawings you like and erotic art that's impressive or well done, and dont jerk off while you do that. milo manara, heavy metal magazine or penthouse comics, shadbase.com and sinnergate.com are some good places to start.

I really dont mean to be offensive at all in what im trying to say.
I have looked at a lot of your art and notice a lot of patterns and mistakes repeating in it.
Also I have noticed a lot of bad criticism calling something bad doesnt help anyone improve and I am not saying you are bad.

I would highly recommend you begin doing gesture drawings daily for 20 , 30 minutes.
I would really recommend getting some anatomy references of the bones and muscles.
I think instead of trying to finish a piece with color and a background focus on improving on your characters and making them look better overall pose energy silhouette .
I totally get this is your style and thats kool.
But you clearly are lacking an understanding in the anatomical area and others as do we all.
I really encourage you to keep going but I would love to see some improvement in certain areas of your work.

If you would like links to various life drawing, gesture drawing anatomical references please feel free to pm me and I will get back to you as soon as I can.
Accept criticism but dont listen to people that just go wow thats awful.
Ask them why it is.
And then learn from it and change it.

All the best.