Love the shading
You presented some really nice shading here that yellow grungy "LOOK" is really nice, the girls expression was nice and really nice job on the lips You should have a more sparkle and glistering effect off the lips, you do some really nice work here keep it up.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should have a more sparkle and glistering effect off the lips
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