love the art lines and pace . true story ! lol
Brilliant! I'd say it'd be funnier if they got pissed at the dude who just left, thinking he made the smell, as part of the cycle. But maybe, that'd be too much. Who knows? I guess it's already funny, so why mess with it, right?
That IS what the joke is.
Unless I'm not understanding what you're saying. The joke in my comic is that as one person enters the smelly bathroom, one is getting the hell out. The one that just came in blames the one that left for the smell and that goes on until infinity.
Either way, glad you enjoyed it.
I never thought about it like that, I just figured the guy before me was a douche who's parents never taught him how to flush and I would just flush it for them to spare everyone the trauma of fermented shitpot.
Very clever though, I had a good laugh.
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