Cute theme, but pallid grey skin and a bloody eye a zombie nor a necromancer make.
Could use more zombie attributes and more necromancer attributes respectively as right now this looks more like a scene from twilight than anything else..
Yeah, I was thinking of this as kind of a first summoning, so shes not totally far gone and hes only recently risen.. I had a whole backstory planned but never shared it. so I completely see everything youre saying and agree 100%!!