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Pretty good........

Could use some color though.

ZRDR responds:

yeah, I would like to add color. Keep in mind that the newspaper I do this for cannot really afford color comics at this point, so I don't bother with it.

A good idea but........

It could have done with som colour, been more spaced out so it is easyier to read and the drawings could have done with more detail. I didn't really get the joke of this comic, "Have you been sniffing Smarties again?" Smarties as in the sweet? Why would somebody sniff chocolate?

to be honest this seems more like a draft of a comic strip as aposed to a completed one.

ZRDR responds:

Sharpies, those markers that will mess you up if you shiff them too long ( yeah, I have learned this from experience ) , not the delicious candy treat... MMMMmm .. smarties.....

ONLY THE PRIMARY COLORS!

what.

I do like the characters, keep it up.

p.s. luis is filled with LIES.

ZRDR responds:

Wow, THE JohnnyUtah read AND reviewed my comic, Thank - you for taking the time to do this!! These characters are very close to me, so it is really cool to hear that you like them. Thanks again for reading and giving such a generous score!

Good start

I thought it was pretty good. i think the last panel would be more effective if like his eyes were swirls or something. I see you had his one eye bloodshot, but i figure if thats your punchline panel, it woulda been nice to have it be a little less subtle.

Lookin forward to future panels

ZRDR responds:

WOAH, TWO newgrounds celebrates rated my comic - and such generous ratings too!
You have a point about the swirls, I just like draw bloodshot eyes.

wow

wow ok interesting and its pretty good but if you want to draw to impresse to need to draw and different perspectives and angles,because everything is on the front view and you could of added some backgrounds like buildings or to make it easy do silhouette of the buildings maybe some trees or something and you got to use more effective ways to use your panels.well i could do this comics for you(maybe).I'll try to show you one day how you could make this better using shading and etc.I would stay here all day explaining you better your visual story telling.I feel like you could make this bigger and size(yeah its a bit 2 small and you could of made this story longer.Your doing good this are very good characters.PS:to make it easy for people to know witch line to read 1st make the 1st one bigger then the 2th one ;) your awesome man.

ZRDR responds:

Thank - You for the great review! I really appreciate that you not only read the comic, but the fact that you looked at the artwork and critiqed it so well! ( Have you ever considered art education as a career? ). I see your point about the fact that these characters live in "Blank Background Land ". Keep in mind that this comic was drawn back when I was first doing comics for my school's newspaper. The next comic I make, I'll try to use shading to give the images more shading (I'm actually not so bad at shading, I just get lazy sometimes :P) Anyway, you deserve some kind of medal for being so gracious with the score and giving such good insight, You're the best yesysh!!!

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Feb 1, 2011
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