You need to cheer up. Have you seen Wall-E? Hilarious.
The torso is really cool, I like how the limbs are attached using heavy shading, making them almost look separate. Great use of blacks, the foremost character is pretty awesome, but there isn't a lot going on anywhere else; All of that negative space could be filled with something really intense. You could find something more expressive for the figure in the background to do as well.
As soon as those lacerations on your guy's torso start moving and turning into snakes you should stop wearing black t-shirts and go to Church more often so you don't go to hell. Cheer up!