Amazing! I like the twist and I love the face in the last panel. Excellent work.
You kept the "crule" spelling! Awesome. This looks about as hot as sex, you really colour well.
You were right... it does look better spelled like that.
Holy shit, it looked fantastic without the coloring, and now it somehow looks better. You're crazy, man.
I am sooo cray cray.
I didn't think it could look any better but some how you managed to make it look 2 times better when you colored it. Great job once again
Oh man, this looks even better colored. I love the creases in the "paper".
To be honest, I thought the last panel had a better impact in the black-and-white version - maybe something about the eyes. But that's probably just because I saw the other one first.
I seriously love this comic; one of the best I've seen on here.
Yeah, I felt that too, its odd how soo much of the impact can be changed by adding color.
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