but it's the same as normal star wars
if you titled your piece "jawa sand crawler" or "tatooine stroll" then i'd give you a 9 or 10 cuz you hit the mark on what you wanted. but you were aiming for steampunk, and it came out like what star wars normally looks like.
i'm not saying it's bad, it looks great, you just didn't hit your target. maybe a decorated smokestack coming out of the astro droid, more visible nuts and bolts hold the crawler together, and hell, why not a jawa with a top hat, monicle, and fancy mustache? that'd be hilarious!
and yes, steampunk transformers would look cool (i think johnny utah did a 1920's transformers sketch all ready)
LMAO... think my brother get a kick out of a Steam Punk Optimus. Consider that on my list... or soon.
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