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Author Comments



Well, this is new. Pretty good too.

Viewing your previous work, I wasn't expecting you of all people to making animation. Pretty sweet actually, I like seeing artists try some new stuff. So, the art itself was great. The animation? Very clunky with lots of minor inconsistencies. Her body movement just awkwardly slides forward and jumps, her nipple randomly gains and loses color, his dick gains more random details, aaaand his load doesn't fall or react like a liquid. It seems more like it's growing solid material. I'd recommend recycling less art and using more frames when animating, that way you can create a more natural flow and bounce in the movement. Her hair seems rather stiff now that I mention it.

So, I know that's a lot to throw at you, but you're talented and I know you can improve at animation if you wish to continue. There's a lot of potential here, hell, it's still pretty good on it's own. It'd be pretty cool to see you make another at some point.

Nice work, m8.

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Davidid responds:

Thank you very much for your review i appreciate the advice. Idk how much of this animation stuff i'm going to do because of its repetitive nature, but i can't deny its fun seeing the end result even though its amateurish at best =)))

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3.39 / 5.00

Jun 19, 2015 | 9:52 PM EDT
File Info
320 x 360 px
491.4 kb

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