Well with this one you really cant see much I have seen the other version I think this could be improved on though, Like adding some "COLOR" just to the main character then the rest in white mess, so that would give it a better visual about things, its just an idea but you should really try it out and see how it comes out.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color in parts of it.
It was only good for a few seconds. I actually dident like this at all. The texture you chose is just really messy and this style just looks really weird.
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