The drawing is good, but you should center on the drawing and cut out all the extra space, like the dark on the right and the pen and blank area on the left. That's all unnecessary and distracts from the work.
I could have very well done that, however I wanted it to have a more indie looking sketchy feel. The drawing itself is balanced while the piece is purposely asymmetrical. Its all apart of the experience. Whether someone likes this comes down to personal taste, and you're definitely not wrong. However I did want you to know it was purposeful c:
wonderful characters, I like the shading and expressions!
Thank you, those are my favorite parts as well!
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