head that is all and the min skirt seem'z to short (unless she'z a drunk party kind of girl -_-) if the idea was someone staring at her then well done
if the idea was for a perv to look at her then you should have had it go to the couch and under her butt with a more cross leged pose this way it look'z both "DONT LOOK PERV" and "WHY ME" instead of O-O dude-> X_X(perv heaven)
i see good just need'z work with style
Remember that faces are three dimensional. Faces should look like they have depth and not look like their features are painted on the back of a shovel.
her forehead still looks pretty long, maybe you could put her hair + ears just a little bit lower
what is the staring problem?
only 2 things, the knee lines shoule be a lil upper, and the breast a lil bigger (not for any fetish thing but because the way the conect to armpits)
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