What is your thesis?
Is your main point the bird, the moon, or the couple?
If the focus is the couple, then make sure that none of the other stuff steal our attention away from them. A good work of art is a good essay, if you sway even a little bit away from the thesis, your work will lose its message.
neither, the point is to look at the scene as a whole not to focus on any one thing in it. The overall objective is to get the user to wonder and imagine the world that this couple live in and whats going on in the scene. Its not meant to tell a story but allow users to each have their own view of it themselves.
Obviously this is a fictional world as the bird is giving off a sort of sparkle effect rather then letting off feathers. Also does the moon have any special relationship with the couple? who seem to be fading? these are questions and answers best left to the viewer.
Thank you for the comment and i'll be sure to keep this in mind in later works.
Wow, this is incredible! I love stuff like this. It's soothing to look at, and it really sparks the imagination.
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