This is real nice, I'm keen on the straghtforward graphical representation of ideas that aren't quite tangible, and it provokes people to have a shared/different opinion to yourself. I like the exploration you've made in the representation of the alternate reality idea.
... I've only got a couple of slight problems, though! You don't need to heap on the multi-syllable words to sound profound, since your pictures should be doing the work for you. For example "visual depiction of conscious evolution" could just as well be shortened to "depiction of evolution". I also think the 3 ideas could work just as well on 3 separate canvases, whilst being tied together as a small series.