It's great to see you taking feedback and trying to improve, and I hope you notice the difference because it really just brings the whole piece to a new level. Great job! I'm gonna stay away from giving any more criticism on this piece, I think you've improved it a lot and I look forward to seeing the new ways in which you'll challenge yourself. Keep up the great work!
thank you very much :) for your answer
though it would welcome criticism on my art since i aim to become much better^^
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