thanks for all previous advices (;
i hope it works better now.

here is my friend story for paint (:

This is Adhara (it is the name of one of the brightest stars in the sky for real); she
is a warrior in her own right, being a brave young woman who is trying to fight her way
to her own goals which is resurrecting her people after they had been destroyed...leaving
her as the last one of her society (except for another she doesn't know about). Her people
were unique...having a touch of Mayan culture and the culture of that you would see in
medieval times...with a flair of their own. They were blessed by a fallen star-one that
gave them more life long ago and thus the ability to control an astral power. This
power is why they were destroyed-for another society stole it and damned them
all. However Adhara plans to change all of that...with her strong will, and the
emotional drive to match-she will stop at nothing to get her revenge and
bring back her people.