Nice work here. I think the strongest part of this pic is the dead serious expression on his face.
There should be a little more shading overall. This leaves it looking a little flat. The dropshadow of the hair onto the face and the shadow of the nose are not placed properly and suggest a different lightsource than the other shadows you added.
I like your cartoony style, not only in this pic but generally, but I wish you would more often do detailed pics.
The caption goes very well with the facial expression.
Overall I think you did a good job, but it leaves some room for improvement.
Thanks for flooding with us! :D
I know the shading is my "weak spot", still I practice a lot and I hope I can make better pieces with better shading in the future.
This is the third flood I join, I wish more people would join to the floods.
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