I really 'enjoy' the effect of the twirled buildings.
Uhh one (little) thing that bothers me is that kind of pink 'edge' around the black hole, it gives it some kind of 'limitation'.
I just read the comment about bacon and i kind of agree with that, hehhh.
The overall concept is very nice, and you drew it well. The coloring job could be a bit better, its very simple, and the smoke or dust doesn't have the texture it should. Also, certain lines in the piece look like there are cracks in the background. Its awkward and somewhat unnecessary. I give it a 9/10 because I think it is very good, but could be fixed in certain areas.
thanks, the cracks are my lazy attempt at erasing. was a bit of a rush job and my last illustration assignment so I wasnt too fussed. thanks for the critique!
I'm sorry, but I can't help but see bacon in the swirling mass of meat and fatty streaks- ahem, clouds. Otherwise fairly well done though. The composition would be more dynamic if the black hole weren't so centered, but I love how you warped the buildings.
wow, you just made me hungry
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