Aw man, you made a pretty common mistake here, by not drawing in the male figures fully outside of the cropped area, you made them look like inhuman lumps of muscle/flesh instead of like human males, though that's not really the main problem with this. The main problem is how her eyes dont go around her head in a correct way, or a way that makes sense. Visualizing forms with depth and then correctly forming them is tough work. You have to wrap the eyes around the head instead of having them touch the edge of the face like that. Even in 'anime' they do this. You should also construct them better, they look rather pasted on and amateurish. The lighting on the right dick is really flat, it looks like a deflated balloon as its going back towards his pelvis.
She has a look on her face like "I WILL ALL THE DICKS IN THE WORLD. ALL OF THEM"
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