Start recreating pictures of famous bands/ personalities and you will go very far with your style
the thing i love about your artwork style is that you can pick out each "brush stroke", another great work of art... i like it as it is... athough i would mabey finish off the hair instead of bluring into the emtpy void like some sort of ghost :P...
once again i saw this in the portal and thought "... is that comsicdeath again!?... it cant be ornery... can it?..."
i would of given this a 9/10... but feel need to go the whole hog with a 10/10
Keep it up! :D