Half a star for the chuckle.
First of all, ALL YOUR BACKGROUNDS ARE LAZY. I refuse to elaborate, I know you're not even spending time on the backgrounds.
As for her, completely shitty proportions. Have you ever seen a naked woman? Their boobs do not have 1.5 feet between them and the neck. The neck is too short and there are no collar bones. Her shoulders look like they got fucking botox and are broader than your own. Her fucking skull looks like an orb. Look at models of god damned skulls and basic faces. Draw a faint fucking proportional skeleton before drawing the body and face.
The crooked window made me laugh again.
This artist has not been scouted yet.
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