Adventure Lady (ArtTrade)


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This is the first trade with ( http://jetly.newgrounds.com/) on this website. Yay! I hope you like it Jetly! :P

Also I was practicing with backgrounds and effects.


alright I am not gonna try and bullshit you and you're 16 so you have enough time to improve ,so lets get start it. your anatomy is all fuck up like the pinkie and index fingers are the same size,your proportions off, you don't really have any line weight, that could be because you might be using a mouse or you're not use to a tablet. I think those are mountains, try to use a picture of actual mountains so you know what they actually look like. so how can you improve look at pros artwork and try to strive for that, do some figures drawing, you can go to pixel loving to practice that shit, you can read Andrew loomis books they help a lot and their free just google it and study anatomy, just keep drawing and improving. here's 5 stars it doesn't mean shit but whatever

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Coolkitten13 responds:

...Thanks for your honesty. I am TRYING to improve so...Yeah. But thanks. I just started drawing people three years ago, it'll take some time to master. And yeah, I know, I'm only 16 so in a few more years I will get better. And you should have seen my shit from a few years ago. It looked like kindergarten drawings, man. I didn't look at a picture of mountains beforehand, and this is literally one of the first backgrounds I have tried to make good. And I HAVE been using a tablet the same time I started drawing people... I am acquainted with it. But yes, I have a lot to learn about the program that I am using and the techniques to better my work. And thanks for the resources. And I really appreciate the honesty, man. I hate when people have that high pitched tone and say, "Yeah, thats pretty good!".

I like the drawing and I feel bad for pointing this out but it looks like she has a dick in her pants.

Coolkitten13 responds:

How so? I don't see how..

ahh! my girl! thanks Coolkitten! I love the folds in the shirt they look so good and the colours are really appealing!

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Coolkitten13 responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you like it bruhhhh. XD hehehe. I'm happy with how it turned out too!

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Credits & Info

3.33 / 5.00

Jul 2, 2015
3:16 PM EDT
File Info
3600 x 3600 px
1.4 MB

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