Screenshot Redraw: Lapis and Jasper


Screenshot Redraw: Lapis and Jasper!

I’ve been wanting to do one of these for a LONG time. In all honesty, I had a lot of fun!

This is also the very first piece I’ve drawn on my new cintiq! Very exciting! C:

Top is the original screenshot; Bottom is the one I drew based off of it.

Hope you guys like it!

You can find the original screenshot here: http://orig10.deviantart.net/015f/f/2016/033/5/4/su_screenshot_theirs_by_madeliine_ann-d9q9l47.png

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Kiss kiss kiss kiss come on kiss hehe i was joking art looks good i like it :)

Poor Lapis Lazuli, when will we find out what's happening at the bottom of the ocean?!

You did a wonderful job with the expressions here. You can really see Jasper's evil intentions and Lapis' fear and apprehension!

I love it when I see your SU art when I check my NG page!

Please draw Peridot at some point, her flaming paint can stilts cry out for fan art!

This is the reason I'm following you, I can tell you went all in on this one. so I'm going to judge it more harshly. It's just the way critique works.

The lines are still rough overall, which shouldn't have been too hard to clean up, it's so frustrating when you see something you like only to zoom in and notice all the flaws. You also lost some of Jasper's expression in the encoding process, she looks more tame here and her eyes don't seem to connect with Lapis' eyes. Nice job on Lapis' expression though, but her mouth looks super flat. It could use more dimension. Last of all, and the most unforgivable thing is that portion of the background in the top-right. Even if you traced it, even if you left it blank, that would be better than blatantly reusing it in your own work. I hate to see such hard work ruined by something like that.

CookieTheCrusher responds:

Thank you for the critique! I appreciate it!

Credits & Info

4.54 / 5.00

Feb 2, 2016
3:10 PM EST
File Info
2400 x 1328 px
2.5 MB

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