ehhh...
You can work on a few things.
your wheel in the last frame in lopsided.
The lines in the background could also be straighter.
The coloring is alright, but the lineart could definetely be cleaner.
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OverKill before and after
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This is just an example I put together to show the difference from my development stage of making an OverKill comic to the finished thing. I put alot of love into this one, and I feel as though alot of photoshoping was done, and I just thought seeing the comparison would be neat. Top: Drawn. Bottom:Inked/Colored. Read more OverKill comics at comicretard.blogspot com
comicretard responds:
Thanks! And yeah, I already know most of this, but I don't take the time to go over the pencil with pen or marker, and all the coloring and effects are done with a mouse. Straight lines are a challenge.
Though, the wheel is messed up, you got me.
Sympathic
Special but good draw style
comicretard responds:
Your review is appreciated, as well as your joy.
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