So I don't normally review these types as I don't know what advise to give in the first place this was a good drawing of a cute girl and you gave her some nice appealing assets there does need to be something done with that background though it's just too bland and needs to be filled in with color or props
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fill in backround with color or a scene or even props
Pretty nice pin-up! Slick and sensual.
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