The expressions are rather good. But the massive gap in quality and effort in the genitals really bleeds over tbh. Slight placement and proportion issues as well. (like the thigh inconsistency) But the colors are really well.
Nothing to add about the story really, its cookie cutter and pretty cardboard. But that seems like the intent.
You do seem really fond of doing haphazard parts in your work. But: Doing that doesn't grant you a free pass. Just because you actively choose to not learn, or be lazy about certain aspects, doesn't mean the parts you actually bother with makes up for them. To use a recent example in media: The portrayal of Eggman won't make up for Sonic's current design.
And: As per your request; Your score is locked to the worst aspect of your content.