Looks great, but my one criticism of it would be that it looks like the girl only had one breast. Maybe the perspective is what's making it look like that, but from what I can see, it only looks like her left breast is exposed.
You have right... i see it now. It would be a little hit, make it look completly good. But i mean, that for NG cal is too late on the change a links in thread HDs on dumping grounds. Thanks for your scouting and critics. When it really goes to press, the change would be quick, nice and easy.
UPDATE - thanks for your tip. I repaired it.
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