E-Claire is right! This is extremely good for a doodle. I could point out some places to improve on, like the hair coloring near the ribbon, but I think you already know about these kinds of things. I've seen your other pictures and I still really like this one. There are difference between the characters, but she reminds me a lot of Sakura from Naruto, only more real or authentic in a way. Keep up the good work and if you ever want to collaborate on something, let me know.