I especially like the mouth, it has a slacking feel, one that suggests that the mouth is heavy. I believe that the outlines could stand to be fed to a ballpoint or fountain pen, or perhaps even A photoshop program, just to get a feel for the detail, not just a shape of what it it.
It`s good, but this needs a lil improvement.
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