A great comic
And here we come onto another piece of the comic and it is pretty good nice style nice adventure and you you made it entertaining as always, I have come to enjoy this comic series and your work you have an interesting style so keep that up its very good. I like it hope you make more, I wouldnt mind that beam of ray more redish just an idea though.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make the beam more redish so it looks more like a beam.