Entertaining

Hail is never fun, I like the added "BLOOD" and love the backround color and detail on these, Onlything I would ad to this submission comic would be make it longer maybe other elements hit him or something funny like that, So another good submission in the series you have here you made it amusing right off the bat the story in this one was really good and made me laugh at the end so you are for sure doing some great things, these characters always have some good adventure and such.

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Onlything I would ad to this submission comic would be make it longer maybe other elements hit him or something funny like that

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Force fields are pretty handy to have around. :) Nice one.

-cd-

so Dave is actually...a super hero? :O

Where do we buy one

For once Dave, you actually are right.