Oh I like the red used here that does tend to bring it out a bit more and you showed some nice work with the different pieces and while I do love color and I know I push color alot I am getting use to you not using it as much the comic style is pretty good though I like your style or it's growing on me lol
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I'm gonna leave this one alone as it was not so bad but kinda nifty
That heart's not working as it should be. XD Kind of not as easy to read the individual strip with all these things packed on the same page like this! But cool stuff. Still planning to keep up the challenge btw, even though you missed 13 and 16????
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