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Dave & Carl #140 - 'Dark'

Be afraid.

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Great entry

and here we are its been awhile since I reviewed one of these, but glad to see some nice and nifty "ADVENTURE" here this was pretty cool, this entry had an extra dose of adventure and some good exectuted humor, and those are just the little things that I enjoy about this.

~X~

oh my gosh, so amazingly low in sugar and calories!!

ChazDude responds:

ty ;]

Nice comic. No racism but do you think he's scared of black people?

ChazDude responds:

He could be.

You really need a smoother way of setting up the punchline, because it felt rather forced. "Also, do you want this left-over chocolate" just seems like a complete non-sequitur.
Nice art, style seems well developed. Simple, yet effective. Maybe work on creating more diverse expressions with the eyebrows.

ChazDude responds:

I couldn't really see any other way to pull off that punchline effectively...

Btw, Thanks, I'm pretty sure this is the first constructive review I've ever gotten.

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Votes
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Score
3.69 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 8, 2014
4:06 AM EDT
Category
Illustration
File Info
2550 x 3510 px
JPG
1.2 MB

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