I think the only problem here is how rigid the arms and legs look, past that it doesn't look too bad
Thanks, I have to say, this isn't my proudest drawing, I just don't like the way it looks for some reason.
Its the legs. They aren't positioned properly. Maybe try making the behind one smaller, and the front one less straight. Keep at it, don't give up!
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