nice, simple, and ,,,,
this would be fairly simple to animate! I like this alot, I like how you kept the boy's anatomy and face simple, but got fairly technical with the robotic appendages and add-ons. I hope you animate this or at least produce another piece similar to this in color.
Robotic parts are fine, body needs tons of work
The robotic parts look fine, but everything about the person is absolutely wrong. The torso looks like a rough rectangular blob of clay suck on the top of some hips. The thighs look about the same. The arms are just tubes and the head is extremely small. Even if you were going for an animu look, which i advise against if you want anyone to take your art seriously, it just looks awkward and disproportionate.
Most of your line work is fine though, just need to learn anatomy
It's very good
all it need is color
You are free to copy, distribute and transmit this work under the following conditions: