Hey! I just wanted to give you a quick tip, I looked at most of your art at a glance as I am crunched for time right now, I just want to say that you did in this piece what I used to do all the time. Block shading and it looks like you rushed to get the block shading particularly on the hair and clothes. things are not block black like that and the hard shading lines aren't very attractive. I learned that with building up your shading slowly and adding midtones, and highlights, you get a much better effect than just fast block colour. Hope this helps! It is hard to explain really but I hope you understand!