it's a good drawing that drawing of cloud is really
this is a great drawing, i love it. everything looks good kinda shakey except for the hair, as stated below me by libarian. :D its great, keep it up!
About suwako's review.
The shakey lines work pretty well for everything but his skin & hair, so if you do an edit, i suggest straightening those things out.
Cloud looks good.
Your version of him is less intense, but well proportioned, I like it.
nice style, i love the style of the vocaloid2 designs, and the style looks nice on cloud :D
i only really have 3 critiques for you;
- the lines are a little shaky, so you may need to work on that, not that it looks particularly bad or anything lol
- one eye is bigger than the other ^^;
- his clothes should have folds in them since you've drawn folds that way, not having them in there doesn't make a lot of sense, if you kind of get what i mean?
except for that, there really isn't anything wrong with this picture. good job
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